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The Problem
 

„Comander we have a problem!“ That was the sentence I never wanted to listen

to. It´s hard to believe how you feel if it happend and believe me you never want. I

saw films in my life before and I always thought it will never happen but if it hap-

pen we won´t be protected.

Now it is, my collage, my friend tell me: „Comander we have a problem!“

He allready talk to me but I can´t listen to him. He is talking about something

like benzine, burning, falling down and die. I see into his face, shocked, his mouth

moves but I can´t understand anything. His eyes are filled with tears and he shakes

me. My friend, my best friend is crying. Now I can listen to his words...

„...I´ll never see her again. My poor wife and my baby, my little baby. My wife

is still pregnant I´ll never see my baby...“ „Oh, shut up! You will se them both.

That´s a order!!“ Now I´m alive, I´m here. I can fight, not only fighting for me, no,

for my friend, my collage, his famlily and his no-born baby. My family and me is

not so imoprtent in this moment, my children are grown and have thier own fami-

lies and my wife... Okay I would be happy if I´m able to see her again, but in that

case it´s not so importent. She will miss me but she will live without me becaise we

had beautyfull 20 years together and I´ll live on in her mementos(memories).

Now my hands are moveing through the cocpit. I don´t think only do. A picture of

my friends familycome into my mind. The racket is ready, now we can move out of

the mashine by ejector seat. But there is another mistake, a defect para chute. I

push the buttom but nothing happend, no life protectig measure. „We have to do it

by a manial way, Chip. I stay here and you have to go.“ Before he can say any

word, he is catapulted out of the racket. It goes striktly downward. I can´t do

something. In my mind I send masgaes to my family and believe that they can hear

me. But now the contact broke down. I can feel the heat and then... Then nothing...
 

(The racket exploded and the ruins fell into the Pazific Ocaen. Jack Mathews collage(Chip) survived and had a

bright life with his wife and his little son Jack who was born at the day when the racket fell down.)



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Bitte keine Beleidigungen oder Flames! Falls Ihr Kritik habt, formuliert sie bitte konstruktiv.
Von:  -Trudy-
2008-03-20T20:40:08+00:00 20.03.2008 21:40
Hi Kleines,...

das ist wirklich eine Story die unter die Haut geht!
Ich wüsste nicht was ich machen würde!
Ob ich an meine Familie und Freunde denken würde oder ob ich beten würde.
Keine Ahnung!
Ein echt schönen Schreibstil hast du!

Liebe Grüße
I-like-Gaara


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